Wednesday, 10 June 2015

T6 Feedback for 7CY2







Now is the time to give you feedback and I would like you to reply to this post with the URL of your 'CT Workbook'.

Don't forget that your workbook should include a report on the game/program you have made using Scratch. It should have the following headings:

Introduction

User Requirements For My Game

Storyboard

Algorithm

Technical

- Variables

-Conditionals

- Loops

Code for My Game

Evaluation

Conclusion

Sources

Make sure that your are using CAPITAL letters at the beginning of sentences and full stops at the end.  All sub headings should be in bold.  Do not use a font which is more than 14 points.
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51 comments:

  1. Mr T15 June 2015 at 03:43

    Mr Thomas here is the link to my 'CT Workbook':

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ogdcj_ClUp2Ob69eHIgZ4G-jvtPdgqZUoqjgMsxdz6E/edit

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  2. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:47

    Mr Thomas here is the link to my 'CT Workbook':

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AZcV5FHEJFGKFkRdzsC5KY0TD6OwUUTaF8HUHSsszlQ/edit

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    1. Mr T23 June 2015 at 01:07

      Abe - some really good work here. I particularly like the way that you have tried to describe the code. However, please ensure that you give a fuller introduction. Now:

      1. Make sure that you give a full evaluation (get feedback from others) and a conclusion (did you achieve your objectives?)

      For next year please download and practice Python V3:

      http://python.org/download/

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    2. Anonymous29 June 2015 at 04:06

      Thank you for the feedback i have improved he introduction,evaluation and the conclusion because of your feedback. I am now practicing python for the next year.

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  3. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:48

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  4. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:48

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1M5Lzm2A1UTRIXREoSOnQ0b-ZrisRKS9LNidwjQ-P4ow/edit

    This is the link to my 'CT workbook.

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    1. Mr T23 June 2015 at 01:12

      Isabelle - excellent work. Now maake sure that you give a full evaluation (get feedback from others) and a conclusion (did you achieve your objectives?)

      For next year please download and practice Python V3:

      http://python.org/download/

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    2. Anonymous29 June 2015 at 04:26

      Thank you for your feedback; I was able to complete my evaluation and my full conclusion. I will now start to practice Python V3.

      Delete
  5. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:49

    Mr Thomas here is my ct work book https://docs.google.com/document/d/11X4NpFYD1L5AgsjwEfuGLTboxAtgfjK6LGRJu2aoD0Y/edit

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    1. Mr T23 June 2015 at 01:14

      Ella - a reasonable attempt here. However, your report is a little disorganised and lacks structure. Also, you need to describe your coding blocks in more detail.

      For next year please download and practice Python V3:

      http://python.org/download/

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    2. Anonymous29 June 2015 at 04:13

      Mr Thomas- Thank you for your comment. I 100% agree with your comment. I think I really need to improve on laying out my work and describing it in more detail. I have now made it more tidy and described my coding blocks in more detail.

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  6. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:49

    Mr Thomas here is my ct workbookhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1x2I49DNn42pYfOGlqQxnCq3d_tjucMb8IIbqtC9dLpo/edit

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    1. Mr T23 June 2015 at 01:17

      Laurie - you have tried hard to describe the code that you have used here -well done! However, I think that you need a fuller and more detail;ed evaluation. Make sure that you get feedback from others:

      For next year please download and practice Python V3:

      http://python.org/download/

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    2. Anonymous29 June 2015 at 04:38

      thanks for the feed back, I have added more detail into my evaluation, added some more feedback from others and put sources into it.

      Delete
  7. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:49

    Mr Thomas here is my link to my 'CT Workbook':

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wrfzIP9orNaMw9Hk_pEcSXDll0OGCC3tA49-tQ1hNzY/edit

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    1. Mr T23 June 2015 at 01:19

      Fabian - you have tried hard to describe the code that you have used here and have done so with much detail -well done! However, I think that you need a fuller and more detail;ed evaluation. Make sure that you get feedback from others:

      For next year please download and practice Python V3:

      http://python.org/download/

      Delete
  8. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:49

    Mr Thomas here is the link to my CT Workbook:

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dn4y2qNHizr0Ig7Uf6JJslgQQM2RcZpBNvkwV0LJ62U/edit

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    1. Mr T23 June 2015 at 01:21

      Eloise - while you have some really good evidence of your technical understanding I find your report hard to read. Please reorganise into the correct headings. Also:

      or next year please download and practice Python V3:

      http://python.org/download/

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  9. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:49

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  10. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:50

    https://docs.google.com/a/gillotts.org.uk/document/d/13q_URB3L26stk1MSMtGHIkV6Kff104vDnCteukgo1Zo/edit?usp=sharing

    My CT Workbook

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    1. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:54

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    2. Mr T23 June 2015 at 01:25

      Katrina - you need to explain what each coding block in your game does. Also make sure that you have an evaluation and a conclusion.

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  11. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:50

    Mr Thomas here is my ct work book
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pigdW-fzkSO2C5jrbe5myzPTfZpMW6t_CiSErA140x0/edit

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    1. Mr T23 June 2015 at 01:27

      Harry - you need to explain what each coding block in your game does. Also make sure that you have an evaluation and a conclusion.

      Delete
  12. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:50

    Mt this is my ct workbook link https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RL8I3nZAe_VTAdIXfL05TY5OothFovXKOFPmGwN43YA/edit?usp=sharing

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  13. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:51

    Mr Thomas here is my CT workbook


    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PDoCqGzGctgV4FOK3FUu1bJ1tugNjOS7bZAhiWoPVoc/edit

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    1. Mr T23 June 2015 at 02:10

      Very little evidence of progress - this is unfinished.

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  14. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:51

    Mr Thomas here is the link to my CT Workbook https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qHYftr55h-psn8N-Ce-nE1gItWmGjhxGdaayd8Lv3s4/edit?usp=sharing

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    1. Mr T23 June 2015 at 02:12

      Lots of gaps in your work. This must be finished.

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  15. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:52

    Mr Thomas this is a link to my CT workbook
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g-tBkrdA5uDdzlPi9sVrtmcXLOmuaSzX-FwexlOa6rI/edit

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    1. Mr T23 June 2015 at 02:16

      Rebecca - this is very hard to read. Make sure that you have completed each of the sub-headings when completing your report. You do seem to have a reasonable technical understanding.

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    2. Anonymous29 June 2015 at 04:20

      Mr Thomas - Thank you for your comment. I completely agree with what you have said and I have done the things you said I needed to work on. I have made my work easier to read and I have checked all my subheadings.

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  16. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:52

    Mr Thomas here is my CT Workbook:
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/16vUBY9F5Fa_tQON0mmeBnkoSzmU3-dSqnKqwuaZkPZo/edit

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    1. Mr T23 June 2015 at 02:18

      Evie, some good work here. I particularly like the way that you have tried to describe the code. However, please ensure that you give a fuller introduction and also a conclusion and evaluation.

      1. Make sure that you give a full evaluation (get feedback from others) and a conclusion (did you achieve your objectives?)

      For next year please download and practice Python V3:

      http://python.org/download/

      Delete
  17. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:53

    Hey sir! Here is the link to my CT Workbook!!!!!!!!!
    https://docs.google.com/a/gillotts.org.uk/document/d/11Fa6A7aVCRJ-HFyr718ahU1axg01kRP0re_XSYiWbmM/edit?usp=sharing

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    1. Mr T23 June 2015 at 01:37

      Sam precious little evidence of progress. You need to show the code for your Scratch game.

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  18. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:53

    Mr Thomas here is the link to my CT workbook;

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hahzNoI4d3jXJ7c_kk7tZWHGtX9f7etARH9V48I1oxA/edit

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    1. Mr T23 June 2015 at 01:41

      Georgia - you need to describe what each block of code is and what it does. Also make sure that you have an evaluation and a conclusion.

      Delete
  19. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:54

    Hey Mr T this is my CT workbook... :0 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uRoc7jIkWN-x1-YPICqNgibprun7xALKKZXgicuMKTA/edit?usp=sharing

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    1. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 04:06

      hi Tommie

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    2. Mr T23 June 2015 at 02:20

      Tom, some good work here. I particularly like the way that you have tried to describe the code. However, please ensure that you give a fuller introduction and also a conclusion and evaluation.

      1. Make sure that you give a full evaluation (get feedback from others) and a conclusion (did you achieve your objectives?)

      For next year please download and practice Python V3:

      http://python.org/download/

      Delete
  20. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 03:54

    Mr Thomas here is the link to my CT Workbook

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d4yFJErMedHw7EtRzbNsW8pmW8TAuFFh68uUF8VkXFk/edit

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    1. Mr T23 June 2015 at 01:29

      Lulu - excellent work. Now maake sure that you give a full evaluation (get feedback from others) and a conclusion (did you achieve your objectives?)

      For next year please download and practice Python V3:

      http://python.org/download/

      Delete
    2. Anonymous29 June 2015 at 04:05

      Thank you for the feedback; I have improved my evaluation and conclusion in response and will now start to practice Python V3.

      Delete
  21. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 04:05

    Hi Sir this is my C.T workbook.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WMRbrNPvECcxosl8FdF5doWMAP5k_McBy5borROAB7Q/edit

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    1. Mr T23 June 2015 at 01:33

      Ben - this is very hard to read with all of the page breaks.

      For next year please download and practice Python V3:

      http://python.org/download/

      Delete
  22. Anonymous29 June 2015 at 04:06

    hi sir this is my workbook
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CuESdpZpoZRnhdwjXaDhbMBC-8dk-MrCpkbkyyeopuY/edit?usp=sharing

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    1. Mr T29 June 2015 at 04:15

      This is hugely unfinished, please follow the template that you have been given.

      Delete
  23. Anonymous29 June 2015 at 04:12

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ztbQ-hJXIma718RLK8FQkNSb6e_ovEEwaCPkS8tAzyM/edit

    this is my link to my work log

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